Spirit in the sky

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  1. redarmychris

    redarmychris Well-Known Member

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    Going on up to the spirit in the sky
    Thats where I'm gonna go when I die
    When I die and they lay me to rest
    I'll be with Rimmo watching the super Reds!! ⚪️⚪️

    Rest in peace Rimmo


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    It doesn't work. Last line is too wordy.
     
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  3. redarmychris

    redarmychris Well-Known Member

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    Already getting belted out works fine.


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    It really doesn't.

    Gonna (I'll be) go (with) to the (Rimmo) place that's (watching) the (the) best (su)

    Where are you fitting 'per reds'?

    Drop super and it fits perfectly but add super and it doesn't fit at all
     
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  5. redarmychris

    redarmychris Well-Known Member

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    Change it how you want

    It doesn't have to match the original song. It doesnt rhyme either but it still works.


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    "I'll be with Rimmo watching t'super reds"
     
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    redarmychris Well-Known Member

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    Nice one mate.


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    why not:

    ...I'll be up with Rimmo watchin' the Reds!
     
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