If you wrote a book/story where the first and last sentence were the same

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    But had different meanings what would they be?
     
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    The end.
     
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    I love Kylie.
     
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    Paul Conway did it.
     
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    Ah but what would be the meanings or context in the opening and closing lines?
     
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    Paul Conway did it.

    He galvanised a town, a football club, a community. Barnsley were in the Premier League.

    _______________________

    The fall from grace was astounding. The corruption gargantuan. The money made from the success a sad cry from the halcyon days of that promotion which seemed decades ago. Fingers were pointed in every direction, but only one person was to blame for this sorry tale.

    Paul Conway did it.
     
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    'His little girl threw her arms around him and kissed his cheek'

    first one is the description of a kids birthday party at five years old, happy with family and friends.

    'His little girl threw her arms around him and kissed his cheek'

    Second one is the adult daughter, having discovered that her father was a nazi during the war, betraying him, Judas style, to the nazi hunters.
     
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    Is this the beginning or is this the end?
     
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    Nudgers Bridge ,





    Nudgers Bridge ,
     
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    To be continued ........
     
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    Can’t believe you didn’t offer Boom, Boom, Boom, Boom…
     
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