Barnsley Haiku's Possibly the first in a Series.

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  1. Jimmy viz

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    A happy scouser with
    golden feet begins a new
    day Oakwell awakens
     
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    Haiku's have seventeen syllables, five on the first and last lines, seven on the middle line, you have an extra syllable on the first and last.
     
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    That website doesn't seem to recognise the words scouser or Oakwell so just assumes they're 1 syllable rather than 2
     
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    I know.
     
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    Didn't we have this,
    Before as Haiku Friday
    Or was it elsewhere?
     
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    Was a regular feature on the much missed BBC 606 pages...R.I.P
     
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    surely you mean......


    "Was a regular
    feature on the much missed B-
    -BC 606"
     
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    Hemsy likes em young,
    players that is, potential,
    experienced? No!
     
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    Odd coincidence that this should come up now because, only yesterday, I wrote an article about a 16th century Korean poet called Yi Hwang and his speciality was the sijo - very similar style. I'm sure you're all agog to see what one looks like, so here is Fragrant orchids in the valley, written in 1565:

    Fragrant orchids in the valley lend enchantment to the air;
    those puffy clouds over the mountain are also delightful.
    Amid pleasures such as these, I still long for my dear one.

    Shock headline: Bulletin board gets culture ;)
     
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