95thminute Barnsley were finally shook into life After being like a whippet in flashing his yellow cards....(eh?) Burton, who had already been caution, Burn hammered the ball Devaney again created on the left on 82 minutes when his swirling cross fell to Hayes (eh?) his vociferous protests saw his sent to the stands.
Nice try Rob. But you missed - "his vociferous protests saw his sent to the stand." And I see you think those two descriptive phrases are ok. "After being like a whippet in flashing his yellow cards"? You're happy with that are you? Oh dear.
Come on Rob, you can do it. "and his vociferous protests saw his sent to the stand." What do you think might be wrong with that? And while we're at it where's "otherham" and who's Mick Hartford? Would you like some clues?
Well done. That's "his sent to the stand" corrected. Now if you try really, really hard we might be able to sort out otherham and Mick Hartford before the next report's due.
Good boy Rob. Nearly there. You've taken the T out of Harford, now all we need is for you to pop a nice R in front of otherham and it'll look like it's been done by a real journalist.
