FAO Rob Knowles

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  1. dreamboy3000

    dreamboy3000 Well-Known Member

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    On the main story you put.........

    The international strikers are now registered with the Club AND are eligible for selection at Cardiff City.

    You should put the word "and" between the words club and are :) :) :)
     
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    eh?

    maybe a comma.
     
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    Have you ever considered electrocuting yourself? nt
     
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    15TH OF APRIL 2006 IS A DAY ILL NEVER FORGET

    ILL ? ILL ? WTF?
     
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    Good Lad Rob........

    as the.........

    The international strikers are now registered with the Club and both are eligible for selection at Cardiff City this evening.

    you have changed it to looks better :) :) :)
     
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    RE: Good Lad Rob........

    </p>

    Now how about changing yours to look better, by getting rid of the unnecessary s.</p>
     
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    eh?

    It doen't read as smoothly now.</p>

    He should remove &quot;and both&quot; to make it an easier read.</p>
     
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    RE: eh?

    Well, that would hardly help matters now would it?
     
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    RE: eh?

    I guess
     
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