From The Stands

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  1. Lew

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    This will probably generate next to no interest whatsoever but I enjoy writing about football and thought what better way than to start in the new year. I've only wrote one thing at the moment as I haven't had much time so if you fancy having a read then it's here and YOU REDS.

    If not, then YOU REDS anyway!!!

    https://crossingthatwhiteline.wordpress.com/2016/01/06/from-the-stands/

    Cheers.
     
  2. Prince of Risborough

    Prince of Risborough Well-Known Member

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    Before I read your attachment can I just point out that it is "I've only WRITTEN one thing at the moment", not WROTE :eek:
     
  3. CrossTyke

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    Well done Lewis, decent read.
     
  4. LiverpoolRed

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    Disagree with the 'by history we are struggling championship side' -think historically we've been a comfortable championship side
     
  5. Tyke_80

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    Enjoyed reading that, also notice you're fairly new to posting on the forum. Guessing you just read it up until recently and now started to share your views.
     
  6. Lew

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    You sure can, can't argue with constructive feedback. Thanks for the read as well, appreciated.

    Thanks to you as well CrossTyke, not the best I know but never done it before.

    Yeah that's arguable definitely. I think a more accurate way to me in hindsight would be middle to lower table Championship side.
     
  7. Lew

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    Nice to know someone enjoyed it mate. Yeah i've only just discovered this forum. I like reading most of what's written to be honest.
     
  8. Prince of Risborough

    Prince of Risborough Well-Known Member

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    Sorry for the pedantry but I earn a part time living as a writer so I couldn't help myself!
     
  9. Whi

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    Keep doing em. I'll always read em. And post more often too.

    You Reds.
     
  10. Lew

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    No apologies needed, like I said feedback is always welcome especially from someone who earns a part time living from it.

    Thank you for the kind words Whitey. I think I will keep doing them, I've read your blog too and listen to your podcasts. You Reds indeed.
     
  11. Whi

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    I hope you do keep at it. More BFC stuff out there, the better.

    If ever you need any help/advice you know where I am.
     
  12. MarioKempes

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    Good read Lewis but I do agree with Liverpool Red that for long periods of our history, certainly from the early '80s we were a comfortable second tier side.
     
  13. I'm Spartacus

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    Oi...Not only are you dissing young Lewis, but also the Comedy Bard Ernie Wise...Shame on you.
     
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    You poor b*stard :D
     
  15. Eas

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    Can I just point out that you failed to put a full stop (or even a question mark) at the end of that sentence?
     
  16. Prince of Risborough

    Prince of Risborough Well-Known Member

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    Oops
     
  17. Prince of Risborough

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    The smiley face is a substitute sentence ender!

    When writing "properly" I use the correct pronunciation.
     
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    Punctuation, surely?
     
  19. Prince of Risborough

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    Oh good grief I wish I hadn't started this! Yes, punctuation is the word. Serves me right for editing an article for submission to my publisher while at the same time messing about on here.
     
  20. Lew

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    Thank you mate. I was born into this wonderful town in 1990 so forgive me, i'm only a young 'en. :D but yeah I agree with you.
     

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