Ode to a well trimmed bush.

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  1. E.I. Addio

    E.I. Addio Well-Known Member

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    #1 E.I. Addio, Nov 23, 2005
    There was a young woman from Gillingham.
    To the waxers she went fo't Brazilian.
    It was cold that day
    When they tugged on her hay,
    and on going outside she'd a chilly-un.
     
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    #2 BIG BROTHER, Nov 23, 2005
    ding dang do
     
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    #3 Jay, Nov 23, 2005
    Ode to a well trimmed bush by Richard kell

    A girl with a well natty bush
    Asked her husband if it made him blush
    When she showed it to strangers
    And Candadian Rangers
    Or groomed her pubes with the yard brush
     
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    #4 E.I. Addio, Nov 23, 2005
    Good but....

    the 'yard' stopped it from scanning well. 6/10. See Me.
     
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    #5 Micky Finn, Nov 24, 2005
    And...

    What's a 'Candadian'?
     
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    #6 Jay, Nov 24, 2005
    Actually

    The first and last line of a limerick should have the same number of syllables in order to scan correctly. They both have 8 syllables. Scans just fine.
     
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    #7 Jay, Nov 24, 2005
    Someone from Candadia
     
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