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  1. dreamboy3000

    dreamboy3000 Well-Known Member

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    The website i co own with my best friend is finally up and running as a full forum. So here is your chance to treat me like Rob Knowles and find fault with grammar, spelling and other minor technicalities that need changing at www.theunprettier.com :D :D :D
     
  2. JLWBigLil

    JLWBigLil Well-Known Member

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    Well...........................

    19/03/07 by WebmasterFF

    Current members of the site might have noticed how a while we moved the forum to "www.TheUnprettier.com/forum".

    It's not the 19th March.

    The sentence doesn't make sense.

    Other sentences have capital letters to start but no full stops to finish>

    Shall I continue?

    BTW, I have only scanned a bit of the homepage!
     
  3. Sup

    SuperTyke Well-Known Member

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    'I' should be a capital letter. You made the same mistake about ten times

    Is afterall even a word?


    constant referances to the word affilate. I believe you mean affiliate?


    The members who blamed me for the loss of power got a forum for themselves. Whilst i made one as refuge for me, Hartstoppa, KJC Smith, Raw_Is_Y2j and Mickey4life2004.

    Should that not be The members who blamed me for the loss of power got a forum for themselves, whilst i made one as refuge for me, Hartstoppa, KJC Smith, Raw_Is_Y2j and Mickey4life2004.


    fanbase? Maybe fan base?


    On 10th August 2005, after many a long and tiring night working on it, WebmasterFF created Captain Charisma'a Wrestling Forum at www.theunprettier.com.

    charisma'a?


    The forum tried to stay as close to noddyrules as it could, with the colour scheme and topcs staying the same

    topcs?


    You can look up your fellow members by clicking the relevent links on the left

    relevant?
     
  4. Sup

    SuperTyke Well-Known Member

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    Laura, I wouldn't bother

    You'll be 14 by the time you've finished reading through them and highlighting all the mistakes.

    In fact to make thing's easier, Dreamboy, you spelled 'contact' right. Everything else is wrong.
     
  5. Lee

    Lee Active Member

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    referances? nt

    nt
     
  6. JLWBigLil

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    LOL

    Well Dreamboy did ask for "constructive" advice, but like you say I couldn't really be bothered to read the site. However, I am waiting for the reply stating:

    "I supplied the pictures, my mate did the text!"
     
  7. Sup

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    RE: referances? nt

    oh bugger. I added that in at the end too, and was thinking of relevance when I typed it.
     
  8. Sup

    SuperTyke Well-Known Member

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    lol

    I blame rob knowles.
     
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    WWF (or whatever it's called now) is *****. End of.

    And you have a lot of problems with your spelling, punctuation and grammar.
     
  10. dreamboy3000

    dreamboy3000 Well-Known Member

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    RE: WWF (or whatever it's called now) is *****. End of.

    I think you mean WWE and their is many other wrestling companies. As for the problems the fault lies at both of us but it's good of people to point things out :) :) :)
     
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    "their is"

    good heavens
     
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    RE: WWF (or whatever it's called now) is *****. End of.

    Well, you've got a good attitude to the constructive criticism, but I still think that WWE is garbage. I hope you won't be criticising Rob Knowles for typos now that you got your own website full of them. By the way I think you meant to say:</p>

    </p>

    'I think you mean WWE and there are many other wrestling companies'</p>

    as opposed to</p>

    'I think you mean WWE and their is many other wrestling companies'</p>

    </p>

    If you've got time to waste watching that wrestling rubbish, you need to get out moreto do something constructive. There is a whole wonderful world out there mate and hardly any of it involves large sweaty men in leotards.</p>

    </p>
     
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    SHOCKING

    Dreamboy I have been with you in laughing at Rob knowles for his typos, but I really dont know how you dare! Your spelling is total crap! I mean I post many a message on here with many typos, but I havent been prolific in slagging Knowles off.

    Have you done it intentionally?

    Otherwise you just set yourself up!

    Apart from that good work on the site! I used to like Big Daddy and then WWF when I was a child, but grew bored of it by about 10.

    Goood work Dreamy!
     
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    Wilmersdorfer Winky Well-Known Member

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    RE: SHOCKING

    **** website (N) although i don't find wrestling interesting in the slightest and i hope rob Knowles see's this post, looks on your website and laughs very loud!
     
  15. dreamboy3000

    dreamboy3000 Well-Known Member

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    Well..........

    the technical side is my best friend and not me. The only thing i can take responsibility for is the history page and when he texted me today saying the full site was being put up I did ask him to proof read it. But hey he's done a good job with layout, colour scheme etc that is still not finished.
     
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    Conkotyke Active Member

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    RE: Well..........

    See. Yer cant trust anyone eh Dreamster! Yeh he has done a good job on it in the main eh. You just set yer sen up for a bit of stick but never mind. Its all in jest as is our fun with Knowles' typos eh. Aif time wunt bit same fo thi wud it?
     
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    RE: LOL

    </p>

    </p>

    You were right. (Y) </p>
     
  18. dreamboy3000

    dreamboy3000 Well-Known Member

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    RE: Well..........

    I don't know the first thing about technical stuff like scripts, designs, templates etc. That is his side of things. Mine is advertising and implementing. I made the original post for help to which we have got and both thankful for. For our first birthday last August we wanted it up and running. But for one reason or another it's dragged on and members kept asking about it and we got it up. Plus it helps having many different eyes checking on something so in the end we get there lol. As for Knowles well you said it yourself that it's all in jest. Nothing said to him as ever been more than a joke.
     
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    Conkotyke Active Member

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    RE: Well..........

    Yer 1st birthday? and 'got it up'? Anyway yeh well done.
     
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    (Rob Knowles in disguise?)

    :D
     

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