We're working on a 'Burn Down the Disco' video advert

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    DJ Fatty Boy, Apr 10, 2009
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    Nice, but a bit too long. Lose 30 seconds for my money. Takes too long for the important part - the music - to kick in.
     
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    Just needs to be a bit "snappier" - so maybe lose a bit from the first half (because it doesn't really get the idea of "live indie bands" across early enough in the presentation). It just looks like "another night club"...

    HTH,
    Stephen
     
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    yeah, good points. Its going to be an advert and also a longer version with interviews. I'll tell the lad doing the video your views.
     
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    No having a go because I think what you're doing is brilliant, but the voice over doesn't seem right to me. Makes it sound like you're going to have some doom metal bands on. Just my opinion, but I am an old fart.
     
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